@dragon.slave: this obviously isn't the whole piece but I thought it was funnier to edit it down to the worst chunks. anyway listen I'm trying my best to inject my real personality into my videos finally but all you people care about are my blobbers. || #writing #writingprompts #wlw #poetry #poetrytok #BookTok #reading #authorsoftiktok #queer #skits #fypシ
This either sounds like its about body dysmorphia or maybe a view on pregnancy, either way very cool poem
2025-04-01 10:36:31
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TheRedgrave :
I somehow figured the poem was about pregnancy and childbirth on first watch😂 the poems need more passion though the line delivery is too dry
2025-05-26 07:34:40
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Cry :
you sound like the sister of the the One guy that simply video games
2025-04-02 12:42:01
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The last sentinel :
it is weird but it sounds like it's inspired by nurgle
2025-04-01 08:36:20
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Reid Daniels :
you low-key sound like Haru from the Beasts tars dub
2025-04-02 12:28:37
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Mr. Glassman :
see i wasn't interested but poetry is my jam. not going to lie this sounded like someone's love letter 😂 like a deprived persons words to tell their love interest. 😳
2025-04-01 04:35:45
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ПIᄃK :
Waffles are better than pancakes
2025-04-01 04:42:16
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Adam Gevelinger :
are you OK? do you need a hug?
2025-04-07 02:53:04
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Austin :
Excuse me I was eating.
2025-04-02 11:01:59
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Teknoman 64 :
This feels like a lore entry or puzzle hint from Silent Hill
2025-04-01 05:28:03
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sᴛᴇᴠᴇɴ ♓ :
Unironically fire
2025-04-01 05:12:05
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Reversed Perspective :
I'm disappointed with myself for never being able to create such phrases for my eldritch horror warlock lad
2025-04-01 21:28:37
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aaklavafgggg :
Sound like you are reading the witcher
2025-04-01 18:35:06
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Mahanniac :
Giving Krieg from Borderlands 😂
2025-04-02 04:25:32
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Jack :
this would be a great poem for a un game fallout note about someone turning into a ghoul
2025-04-04 16:00:22
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accidentallybi :
this would have the opposite effect on me
2025-04-01 21:32:31
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sunlightyuri :
as a man on my wife's account while I release the corruption of my darkest reaches, I want you to know that your poetry goes hard as hell and frankly you're funny asf.
2025-04-03 12:33:07
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Jordan :
Keep this up and you might have a copy of The Boneturner’s Tale coming your way
2025-04-03 16:41:07
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VagabondBadger :
I'm actually trying to break down what your poem symbolizes
2025-04-02 00:01:10
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Chewy & Murci :
id cuddle to ASMR like this,
fall back now little one....
you know not the darkness 🌑
you summon 🤫🦹🏾♀️😆
2025-04-03 18:08:40
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head_body__ :
It sounds like metal music lyrics
2025-04-03 01:54:23
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EccentricStoner🍃 :
Sounds Like An Average Day In The Berserk Universe😭
2025-04-03 16:01:11
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BegunWings :
Very descriptive poetry. Good job 👍
2025-04-03 00:13:53
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deldo :
just show them that you have hobbies and interests and usually they leave you alone
2025-04-01 16:55:14
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