A Space to Write (Maria)
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Sötét Mesék Könyvtára :
"When my grandfather died neither me or my mom cried. There are people who deserve a good mourning, my grandfather was not one of them."
2025-04-14 03:45:31
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Estella :
mine is literally just "The king is dead"
2025-05-01 14:26:32
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Prismaturon🔥 :
Help me💔💔💔💔
2025-06-07 03:42:52
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kehlani🦢｡⋆ :
mine is just “If hell had a calendar, this year would be circled in red”…..
2025-05-26 21:22:27
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TheDeadRoseRed :
also if the first sentence just isn't happening, don't linger! start writing about the weather anyway. somewhere along the way you'll find it. sometimes the end gives you the perfect beginning 🤗
2025-04-11 15:13:08
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🇰🇷☆Milo☆🇰🇷 :
"The breath of death. I felt it right away. I wanted to run, but instead I threw the mirror away. What did I just see? Oh dear... Not me, but my worst nightmare" how is this?
2025-05-15 13:32:09
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⚔️👹🌊🔥/🤞🔵🔴/🕊🧣/📓🍎/🍌🐟 :
mine is "Most people expect the day their life ends to be the day they die, but as Akiyama stood with her eyes fixed on the fire that was consuming her home, she couldn’t help but think her life had ended." its a bit long but I think it works 😭🙏
2025-06-06 10:28:55
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𝐟𝐢𝐧𝐥𝐞𝐲 ✡︎ :
mine us "i have a headache." HELP???
2025-05-24 15:52:22
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kit :
uhhh idrk about this, it’s only a first draft so any suggestions would be super super helpful [cry] “Ollie Cooper was a nervous boy; tall for his age yet barely imposing, he often held himself quiet lowly, looking up at the world from under his eyebrows.” the story is supposed to be almost boring initially with only hints of the spookier stuff happening underneath, so again any ideas how to improve would be super appreciated c:
2025-05-19 00:08:03
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Elx :
Light was born throughout time, though it was also without—somewhere beyond it. You might expect animacy, dear Ever. But, in the story, Light has taken form and we must give her a name so she may find herself in darkness.
2025-06-05 18:46:26
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Zndiary :
I was planning on starting it by setting the scene before introducing the character.. is this a bad start as you stated not to open it with the weather etc
2025-05-28 19:57:04
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Arianna (Omar's version) ♡☆ :
There had been many theories about who was to marry the princess of sacterra, but no one expected eight knights to fight for her hand. (I don't like i)
2025-05-30 05:18:11
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☆ :
Sorry if my english is bad but is this is good : " James was sitting on the floor, near a telephonic machine, scared for his life and for the future of his planet "
2025-04-14 22:22:00
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rishh :
Mine is just "I was the type of girl who didn't care about Academics" 😭💔
2025-05-28 07:36:58
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Foodwatt :
"It was a dark and stormy night, and it was raining and stormy." heh... modern day shakespeare, I know, I know. no need for applause [pride]
2025-06-06 05:53:11
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🧸 :
“Blood doesn’t wash off stone easily. Especially when it’s a child’s blood.” - should I keep it?😅
2025-05-25 10:15:56
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Grass2811 :
I don't think it's very good. please tell me if I need to change it please. 'The screeching siren of the long, broken alarm wakes me up with a jolt as it does every morning.'
2025-04-21 08:01:33
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Tiqqi :
"The ground under my feet has been pulled and the shelter above my head has been destroyed." Is that a good one???
2025-04-21 00:53:28
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ᕦ(ಠ_ಠ)ᕤ :
I have two first sentences, one for the opening chapter which I prefer. but also one in the very short prologue before. and I have nowhere else to put that small scene and it's important
2025-04-12 02:37:17
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Melysa Cook :
mine is "Violet never talked about it, but when she was twelve, her dream was to get married and have children."
2025-06-01 13:23:14
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⚔️Teen writer⚔️ :
Well I re write my first scentence many times but my current one for my first draft is: The first time Zoya saw a woman hanged for talking back to a man she was six, it was then she realised— Nivoria was a man’s world, and women were not welcome in it.
2025-04-13 18:09:00
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@double delulu :
"It was a life filled with dreams until a person ruined them for their own benefit. The world was dull until I met him." Or something like dat(?)
2025-05-30 11:39:29
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joshcrowe11 :
Mine begins with the sentence with the end of the American revolution as it kinda sets the scene of why the idea of the book exists although Idrk. Can someone tell me if it’s good
2025-05-14 18:23:09
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ollie🙀 :
Alaskan shores are never warm in the winter. Or in the summer, spring, or autumn. Or ever, not that anybody actually goes to the shores in winter. (character reading this from an old diary he found)
2025-05-10 21:00:47
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