@dongiesquill: specific but common injuries in writing but ✨REALISTICALLY✨ || #writing #writingtips requested by @Sage 🔜 MomoCon !!

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bruhhhsoundeffect2
yo momma :
“your character is NOT-“ MY CHARACTER IS DIFFERENT THO FR 🗣️🗣️🗣️(shes dying 2 seconds)
2025-05-07 16:10:08
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.doctor.octopus
sukuna's vessel :
my favorite part about reading these is ignoring them because my oc is just that guy
2025-05-07 18:41:45
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julesclairmont
JuliusClairmont :
As someone who’s been stabbed in the face, yeah, talking is challenging. I had to become a damn thesaurus and use synonyms because I couldn’t say certain words because they hurt worse than others
2025-05-09 23:33:33
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v2dex
chanel2silly 🗣️‼️ :
this is so helpful i love kicking my characters while they’re already down
2025-05-07 19:52:08
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wompwomp5480
Iamway2sleepy :
These are awesome! Can you do one with a gash across the eye? :))))
2025-05-09 01:51:25
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zukafu_
Zukafu :
so basically no one has ever written a realistic fight scene because it would always end in 5 minutes max.
2025-05-08 23:16:46
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omen._.cos
Omen :
I've cracked some of my ribs on the left side, and the pain is VERY sharp. you don't even want to laugh, it hurts sm. It took a few months for mine to heal because I still had wrestling practice. (1)
2025-05-07 16:02:58
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nametag00
mister :
i always hated how characters would spit out blood from internal bleeding and be perfectly fine
2025-05-07 18:56:15
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bits.ow
Brandon :
You’re amazing for this
2025-05-09 21:35:00
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trislvr
tris 🇵🇸🇨🇩🇸🇩🇨🇫🇸🇾🇾🇪 :
do you think it would be realistic to have the characters at least attempt to fight even if the injury is somewhat bad if it's a life or death situation (fighting to the death for survival)
2025-05-09 20:01:05
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jessi307965
JessZaWolf🐺 :
I would love to use this if I drew humans
2025-05-09 21:22:19
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crowbqyvad2
Pancake_140 :
"pinch nose and lean forward" this is how you stop the blood from coagulating. Gut punch? Unless someone hits you like a bus, functional recovery is like a twenty seconds (long time in a fight) 1/2
2025-05-09 22:02:30
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prodigy_gemral
💎Gemm💎 :
Okay but what about a character that have that syndrome/disease that make it not feeling pain at all? One of my characters has this, he sprained his ankle once and I made him not feel anything but suddenly loose balance/tripping on nothing and then investigating why is that.. alright or i should've taken more into consideration?
2025-05-09 05:58:28
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vihar_m
vihar 💫 :
learning anatomy and getting a degree medical to write a fight scene 🥀💔😭🙏
2025-05-08 23:10:43
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naleestak
Tato =͟͟͞͞(꒪ᗜ꒪ ‧̣̥̇) :
so, doctor here yes the skull is hard and actually is pretty difficult to punch, on most fight styles you don't go for the head with the hands bc of that (boxing didn't until they got the gloves)
2025-05-08 21:36:40
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thecatdraws
🚦🎋RibBoneInADesk🪱📼 :
I love having a character who tries their absolute hardest to walk off these types of injuries, only to continually make them a million times worse.
2025-05-09 21:07:49
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sybbugr
sybbugr :
congrats this made me taste blood and shiver ❤️
2025-05-09 21:08:01
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sprinklesesamii
rose ❤︎ :
I agree w all of these except nosebleed, idk i’ve had them from blunt force injuries and it didn’t incapacitate me enough that i’d HAVE to stop fighting (ig it depends)
2025-05-07 18:45:26
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vigor_checker
☦︎ 𝔗𝔥𝔢 𝔖𝔞𝔫𝔡𝔪𝔞𝔫 ☦︎ :
Have you never watched a fight?
2025-05-07 14:50:36
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bigballskylie
kylie :
Boxers wear gloves and wrap the hands to protect themselves primarily; hand bone structure is delicate and easy to shatter
2025-05-09 16:10:41
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linguisticvulpes
◐❅Ren レン🏴󠁧󠁢󠁳󠁣󠁴󠁿🇮🇪❅◑ :
Me, who's popped my own dislocated shoulder back in and gone about my day more times than I can count: Am I god? 😮
2025-05-09 19:25:23
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dascurvee
the_end_of_everything :
Hello, I recently sprained a ligament in my knee. I couldn't move my lower leg to walk and i had to drag it mostly, and stumble along. Nerve pain also occures. Hope this helps.
2025-05-09 20:56:05
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ireallylikebooks4
Ireallylikebooks :
alright NOBODY tell Rick Riordan or Holly Jackson about this page because they will put their characters through so much more trauma
2025-05-08 00:00:41
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chaotic.grizzly
chaotic.Grizzly :
Is there somewhere to see this that doesn't cut off some of the information though
2025-05-09 19:25:23
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mercuryrising0
Mercury Rising :
I have 100 percent rolled my ankle bad and immediately started walking on/walking dogs. I know it's not the same but if you know how to redistribute your weight and are too stubborn for your good, you
2025-05-07 17:50:37
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