@prosewithoutthorns: Another consideration when omitting skin tones when writing your book. #fyp #writingmyfirstbook #writertok #writingabook #writing #writersoftiktok #writers #writingmyfirstdraft

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brentjohnerauthor
Brent Johner 🇨🇦 Author :
I learned two things from this post. 1. Beyonce is blonde. I’ve probably seen her a thousand times. I never noticed that. 2. Readers may not realize your character is a POC unless you say so. 🙏
2025-06-27 19:53:10
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xcriimtaaviengers
Oryx🦌🖤 :
Your videos have really helped me when writing People of colour in my book🥰
2025-07-27 18:26:42
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aliciakiner
Alicia :
completely OT: I ❤️your shirt!! 😁 now to rewatch cuz I was so distracted 🤣
2025-07-23 16:33:20
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vicki_3.14
Vicki Barnette Adams 🇺🇸 :
White is not the default for singers for me. But saying blonde I would default to white.
2025-06-29 04:29:15
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taylorc923
Taylor Duncan :
It’s so crazy that as readers we assume white unless told otherwise. We have been trained to think that white is normal and POC’s are “other” even when we are the “they”.
2025-06-28 15:36:24
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rosetheharper
Rose The Harper :
High school conditioned me to NOT describe someone's race in conversation unless I believe it is relevant to the story. I will occasionally mention skin tone if I need to specifically identify a mutual acquaintance. This has led to a number of interesting scenarios and misunderstandings as an adult.
2025-07-24 17:54:56
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aviance02
Avi😘 :
How do y’all not know that her hair is blonde. It’s always been like a honey blonde with highlights
2025-06-28 08:22:47
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just.jane.09
Jane 💪🧋🫶📣 :
Ehhhhhh I feel like that’s a stretch. Blond characters/people are presumed to be White because that’s the race that most commonly has NATURAL blond hair. Just like describing a characters locks would make someone assume they’re black because that’s the race the most often has that hair. Yk?
2025-06-28 06:45:26
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saturnsunride
Saturn :
My dark chocolate child currently has their natural skin color but mine had blonde highlights in the summer as a child. And my child has had blonde, blue and all kinds of flavor hair. My ethnicity confuses everyone
2025-07-27 16:06:15
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abitas_
Abitas :
Girl, i would've guessed taylor Swift and gave up because i dont have any memory of any celebs hair. or really anyone other than who I watch lol
2025-06-28 13:58:22
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sophaloaf23
sophaloaf :
I've read so many books where everyone else is "blonde" or "brunette" and the character of color is just "the black character." 😑
2025-07-24 20:15:18
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drakkozw
drakkozw :
What I find very interesting is that nobody's y seems to even consider that the singer isn't a woman - despite the parameters of the question not mentioning gender at all
2025-07-25 20:07:58
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lesbianseal831
rose ᖭི༏ᖫྀ 🌀⚢ :
i didn’t know beyoncé was blonde
2025-06-28 06:29:26
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jaxzuc24
Jaxson Zuccala :
I always prefer books to say what skin tone ppl are bc it’s so annoying having to rewrite your mental image of ppl 2 books in bc you had nothing to go on in the first place
2025-07-23 15:22:23
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art_beyond_category
art_beyond_category :
The example you used about a "Blonde haired singer" is pretty broad and with almost no context. You can write a POC character without having to point it out and the reader will still know writing about a POC. I guess it depends on your story. No right or wrong here
2025-06-29 20:17:05
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janesnotacat
KeenJane :
all of the guesses. I would have needed to guess every white female singer. and then I would have been stumped. "blonde" is one of the few descriptors that is almost exclusively used for white women. also Bey's hair isn't blonde on her current tour 😭 its honey brunette at lightest
2025-06-29 03:52:45
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laqmont
Adr :
I'd never list Beyoncé because in my mind she isn't blonde lmao
2025-06-28 08:53:02
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truwhiteout
M.E.S :
bc ppl think the default is whiteness, but I do have a question what are some of your go to descriptive words for the various shades of black/brown skins?
2025-06-29 22:06:56
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strmpt
logan :
i think a lot of writers neglect the skin tone mention for plausible deniability. it’s a sneaky way to be able to shoehorn “diversity” while being able to maintain your sensitive white readers
2025-06-29 04:35:38
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cinnamochan666
(~ ̄³ ̄)~ :
and what about east asian characters? bc i think it would be a similar case, but east asian people have similar skin tones to white people
2025-06-27 23:45:00
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valentine_calla
Virden :
I wouldn't have guessed her because I don't keep up with her and didn't even know she had blonde hair 😭 but ur point is accurate and makes sense
2025-06-27 20:12:18
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dan095496
dan :
If someone described a blonde singer I would assume they’re white, because it’s only really white people that have naturally blonde hair
2025-06-28 14:57:33
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jaejaebaesil
jaejaebaesil :
it's bcuz in just about every aspect of society, whiteness is THE default. i have seen many times fans of visual media quickly assume a racially ambiguous character is white, and when you point out how thats not the case, they usually get mad
2025-06-28 15:49:32
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allisonwoodin
allisonwoodin :
There’s a great article about writing race in fanfiction where the author talks about ff authors writing Black characters as if they are transparent to avoid mentioning skin tone. (Specifically Anthony Mackie)
2025-06-28 00:35:59
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dndsbian
dndsbian :
Eh….. not a great metaphor. Beyoncé’s hair is not always blonde, I don’t picture her with blonde hair. Also, her hair is not her distinguishing feature. Normally you mention a distinguishing feature about someone when you’re describing them.
2025-06-28 06:24:34
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