@admitium: Checkout a part of my conversation with former Dartmouth AO and Director of Enrollment Planning Kevin Ramos-Glew. Here, we’re in the middle of discussing a challenging question from @ian.klimovv: How does an AO differentiate genuine passion and personality in an application from something forced or fake? Kevin offers the fresh idea of writing that sounds like a kid in a T-shirt and jeans—not a suit. I mention one example of how simple that can sound. And if you’re interested in more examples and learning specific techniques for writing with voice and authenticity—like you’re in a T-shirt and jeans—check out my Admissions Masterclass or Writing Workshop: Admitium.com (Link in bio) #collegeadmissions #collegeapplications #collegeessays