“ if the moon controls the tide, I’m certain you control the moon” - this part here got me.
2025-10-21 19:36:59
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Cinnamon Buns :
for hard guy like me . this one made me stop listen and feel. and thought of that one .....
2025-10-21 15:16:21
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Angel :
in God's words I'll give up my only son to die for you and generations after
2025-10-21 20:28:51
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jake :
In english we say i wish i could make you see how beautiful you are. In poetry we say i know you don't see it and you probably won't believe me anyway but i spoke to the sunrise this morning and it told me it was jealous of your smile the way it could brighten even the places that haven't seen sun in awhile. I know you dont see it, and you probably wont believe me anyway, but ive heard whispers from the songbirds that they been feeling insecure ever since they caught wind of your voice in their ears. and i know you dont see it and you probably wont believe me anyway, but the sea's been awfully still ever since it saw you move, if the moon controls the tide, im certain you control the moon and i know you dont see it, and you probably wont believe me anyway, but if i could give you my eyes and ears if you could listen to the rumors that I do you'd hear the whole world catch its breath at the mere existence of you.
2025-10-22 01:23:58
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۞D҉E҉M҉O҉N۞ :
I had actually made a poem like that just slightly different
2025-10-22 16:38:17
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PalindromeRPG :
“In poetry we say…” brilliant! 🔥🔥🔥
2025-10-23 00:34:06
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Al Castellon :
Damn that’s cool words 🤟😏
2025-10-21 06:27:28
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Jewbacca :
In English we say I love how your broken, but in poetry we say, "That if I had a paint bush I mold gold in your cracks, Kintsugi, isn't discarding the broken but the formation of something new. Show me someone who is scarless and I'll show you someone with no story.
2025-10-21 20:26:21
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slumbum87 :
Andrea 3000
2025-10-22 02:30:06
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.Tony_Tone. :
I was tearing up after 2 lines 🥺
2025-10-22 01:37:22
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Keith :
Ok. Didn’t know I needed that
2025-10-21 14:03:16
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TheKid :
lots of beautiful people i have crossed paths with on the journey called life
2025-10-21 04:00:05
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michaelmattinglyj :
duuuuuude. That was so good, I hope you get a book published. I remember reading those Shel Silverstein books like Where the Sidewalk Ends, you could DEFINITELY do those!
2025-10-21 14:01:32
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JayBees :
how I feel about my wife. ❤
great words!!
2025-10-21 17:00:27
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appleuser47472396 :
So beautiful. It’s amazing what one can do with real effort. Thank you!
2025-10-21 19:30:33
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Bryan Clark :
Wow.
2025-10-22 23:40:29
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akashic0326 :
Absolutely beautiful
2025-10-23 00:10:03
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TJ :
That pulled me in. Well done
2025-10-22 05:12:26
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superchris40 :
Hopefully One day, I’ll be able to send this to a beautiful lady. Hopefully 🙂
2025-10-21 19:38:13
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LenParker1 :
Wow. 🔥🥰💯
I love listening to your poems.
Moving 🔥
2025-10-21 01:18:36
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beckaboo4you420 :
❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️Very beautifully written
2025-10-21 17:43:05
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Nathan :
Could sit,just listening to these words for a bit
2025-10-22 06:02:09
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